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{When we simply crumble...} Chapter Two: And the other crumbles...while another cracks....
by Rebecca Harle Valentine (taki_sophitia)
at July 6th, 2005 (01:47 am)

Momiji clung to Yuki as Yuki stroked his hair gently, “Hush, Momiji…everything will be okay…” Momiji shook his head violently and Yuki tried to comfort him.

“No they won’t! I’ve got an eating disorder, I started cutting myself, I’m in love with Kyo…!” He sobbed bitterly as Yuki made a funny noise.

“Cutting…yourself?” He squeaked. Momiji nodded.

“Yes..” He whimpered, “Yuki…can I stay here?”

“Yes! Of course!!! You can sleep in my room, alright?” He hugged he smaller boy tightly.

“I want to take a nap now…” Yuki nodded and led him to the room and put him to bed. Momiji fell asleep quickly. Yuki stepped out and leaned on a wall. He felt tears make their way down his face.

‘Dammit, Momiji, you’re blind! You…can’t see what’s in front of you. What would you do if you knew? Would you ignore it? Would you care?’ He whimpered, ‘Oh…my beautiful Momiji…I love you, if that counts for anything at all…I love you so very much…’ He walked back into the living room. Tohru sat there, a worried look on her face. Suddenly, Yuki burst. Kyo looked so damn indifferent!!!!

“STUPID FUCKING CAT!!!! I HOPE YOU BURN IN HELL FOR YOU TRANSGRESSIONS!!!!!” He turned and swept out of the house, his farewell being, “KYO, I FUCKING HATE YOUR GUTS!!!!” Tohru gasped.

“Yuki-kun!!! YUKI!!! WAIT!!! What the hell!?” Tohru looked pissed off, and she was picking up on Kyo’s language, “What the hell did you do?” Kyo had a weird look on his face.

“I have no bloody clue what I did….for once…”


Yuki was in his garden, staring, tears in his eyes. How could Kyo hurt Momiji like that? How could someone hurt beautiful, sensitive Momiji? Now he’d never heal…and Yuki wouldn’t be able to help, either. It was pointless to even try.

“Momiji, I’ll die if you die…” He hugged his knees to his chest, “I love you, why must you ignore that fact? You’re my angel, my love, the only thing I want in life…” He whined softly, “Please…someone kill me now…”

“YUKI-KUN! BROTHER!!!” Yuki growled. Not now...not now…not- “How are you, dear brother?”

“Fine, Ayame,” Yuki growled, “Just fuckin’ peachy!” He glared, not really knowing WHY Ayame was there…or how he’d know that Yuki was there.

“Seriously, how are you?” Ayame dropped his ‘I am superior’ voice.

“Does it matter to you, Ayame!?” Yuki snapped. Ayame nodded.

“Yes,” He said. Yuki looked rather stunned.

“…Momiji has been hurting himself, trying to get Kyo’s attention, but Kyo is in love with Tohru. And I’m in love with Momiji. But…now what? It’s so sad…he’s starving himself, cutting himself, telling himself that he’s ugly…when he’s really the most beautiful creature ever to walk this earth…oh, Ayame, whatever am I going to do!!?” He clung to his older brother, who was grinning.

“You tell him, Yuki…”

“I DO WHAT!!!?”
“You tell him!!!”

Yuki nearly felt himself faint, “Uh…can you say no?”

“Yes, but I don’t like that word,” Ayame said. Yuki slapped his forehead.

“What do I get for doing this?”

“…A week without me?”



Yuki walked into his room…and felt his heart drop.

Haru…..and Momiji……

He ran from the room, the rose he carried left behind in his wake…

For Momiji Sohma had gotten his comfort from someone else while Yuki had been confused.


‘Yuki…you fool….do you know? That I love you? No…of course not….and you don’t care, either….’


Kyo watched Yuki run out of the house, crying. Tohru raised an eyebrow, “Really, what the hell is up with him?”

“Heh, I dunno, but I’m really starting to like your language…” Tohru grinned and hugged Kyo on purpose. He stared, “I hate you, Tohru..”

“No, ya don’t.”

Well! I’m back! I like this story, I think I’ll post it on FanFic.net! YEAH!!! Who is Yuki’s mystery lover? Will Momi stay with Haru? WILL I MAKE TOHRU CUSS MORE!? Yep, you bet your pretty little head I will!!! w00t! Until next time! Sayonara! G’bye! Bye, dudes! See ya! TTYL! Bai bai! Buh bye now! Okay, I’m done.


Posted by: ((Anonymous))
Posted at: July 7th, 2005 07:09 pm (UTC)


Wait, nevah mind me. The conflict and sadness is good. You better put this on fanfiction!

Posted by: Rebecca Harle Valentine (taki_sophitia)
Posted at: July 7th, 2005 10:39 pm (UTC)

Si! I probably will. Later. o.O Like..when I finish it, no?

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